Friday, August 12, 2011

Skil post 2

In my writing class, our teacher gave us another mission; summerize and paraphrase. To complete our class's mision, I'll summerize the article named "Shark attack" and "". Secondly, I'll paraphrase an article named "Bear attack" and "".

Summerize: Shark attack
 It is POSSIBLE to get attack by a shark, it is highly unlikely. Even if you see a shark, ot will not attack you. Instead, struck by lightening is more likely. In fact, it is more likely to drown than to be attackes by a shark. There are several ways to reduce the chances when tou meet a shark. First, travel in groups and stay out of water if you have a cut because shark has a good sense of smell.

Paraphrase: Bear attack [6 paragraph]
 To reduce the chances by bear attacking you, you have to travel in groups. Bear don't usually attack people in groups. also  you have to stay calm and try not to run away if you run into a bear.

Summerize: http://www.columbian.com/news/2011/aug/11/vancouver-woman-killed-loose-horse/
 A woman died from loosed horse. She died about half an hour later, according to her husband, who was nearby when the accident occurred. They said “It happens every so often.”. He found her on the ground and bleeding from the mouth. A woman died 30~40 minutes of being kicked. They said, animals aren't predictable even if they are friendly.

Paraphrase: 4th paragraph
 Jerry finished excercising and other horses came back to the barn. He came and saw her bleeding. Paramedics came but it was too late to save her.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Annie
    I like your summarizing and paraphrasing!!!!
    Nice Work ^.^

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