Wednesday, August 3, 2011

Skill Post 1

 In writing class, our teacher gave us a mission "compareand contrast these 3camps.". The camps are, 'Camp Big Apple'(Apple), 'Ranch West Camp'(Ranch), 'Head Start Splash'(Splash). Our group chose 'Ranch West Camp' the best camp. I'll contrast and compare other 2camps to this camp.

 First,  Apple sleeps in th dormitory but the Ranch do home-stay. I think doing home-stay is good for us because we can learn English more easily. Instead, Apple can increase friendship and coaperations. Also, Apple studies for vocabulary and for SAT. I don't think SAT is not for elemantary school students and for middle school students. On the other hand, they can take SAT more easily and comfortable. However, Ranch can pick a subjet that we want to study. Therefor, we can focus on a subject and be an expert.

 Secondly, the similarities between Apple and Ranch are that we can't stay with one of our family members. Therefor,  we con learn socialskills or coaperations.

 Thirdly, I'll compare Ranch and Splash. In Splash, the teachers are local teachers. That is okay, but they won't know many things and qualities. Alos, they can live at least one parent. I think that s more safer than being with a family who doesn't know.

 Lastly, I'll contrast them. Their similarities are that study from local univerity teachers and live close to nature.

 Okay...I finished our mission. Afer doing it, I thought about differances and similarities. It was  difficult to find, but it was fun. Thank you Mr.R!!

1 comment:

  1. Nice ideas, but I would like to see more transition words.

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